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Sep 7, '05 7:20 AM
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海边情诗

――赠同道

丹霞映照着蓝天，

晚风吹抚着堤岸。

海浪卷起细沙，

又轻轻把它们放下。

它们交头接耳地说个不停，

一答又一答。

我倾耳聆听它们的歌唱，

好想把这动人的音符带给远方的她！

乙酉年八月初四兴起而作

＊“吹抚”原词为“吹拂”，为增添诗之美感而有所替换

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纯情的男子，浪漫的心，炽热的情怀…把这首情诗献给天下有情人…

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happybowls wrote on Sep 7, '05, edited on Sep 7, '05

wow....the sun from the sky n the sea used the bridge as their matchmaker...they come together as a couple and have a slow walk on the bridge to enjoy the night breeze after the sunset...

sorry...i got no ink...juz kidding....

jpeachy wrote on Sep 8, '05

happybowls said

the sun from the sky n the sea used the bridge as their matchmaker...they come together as a couple and have a slow walk on the bridge to enjoy the night breeze after the sunset...

good imagination san, sure u can create a romantic poem on this =>

happybowls wrote on Sep 8, '05

sorry...my england is not powerful enough....I know only Singish...

jpeachy wrote on Sep 8, '05

happybowls said

sorry...my england is not powerful enough....I know only Singish...

ah...spelling mistake-send u back 2 P1!! ;)

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